Wednesday 21 May 2008

introducing the geek- Gangster and the Geek


Gangster and the Geek
Geek constructs software to make gangster sound amazing
Set in geeks home lab/computer room.


Geek:

At computer listening to music types. Jazz is playing first.


“hummm……. that’s never going to work”


Geek goes to another music style. Moves computer mouse and clicks it to a new page, brings up bad rave music. Covers his ears in pain.


“ ahhhhhhh… what the”


Quickly closes page with rave music.Picks up a mug of hot chocolate.


“mmmmm”


Goes on to another page. Elvis plays. Nod head and sings like a cat.


“ ohh don’t you step on ma blue sued shoes you can do anything……”
-sings to teddy on desk top.


“ gotta love the king! don’t think it would suit gangster though ”
Taps his fingers on desk top, then puts elbow on table to rest his head.


- talks to teddy bear on desk top
“ this isn’t working” .


Takes bear and dances with it to Elvis. Thinks to him self.
“why does gangster listen to all that hip hop, when he could listen to classic stuff like the king”


Excitedly waves arms about
“Ohh.. Ohhhhh that’s it, I will turn him into a rap star, just like that ehh wus his name kanye pepper, fifty pence and twin pac”

Scene 2

Geek: Geek is at the white board writing formulas to make gangster great.
Keeps scribbling and wiping it off.


Clock on the wall indicates the time going in quickly.


“ if q is equal to the sum off 125000 to the power of 25 then….. then x has to be……”


Close into the clock with the hands spinning round.


“Yes ye…………ssssssssssssss!! Y equal to m to the power of three, meaning that it’s the perfect sound wave.”


“ I’ve got it, I know the formula to make the sound modulator…. A genius if I don’t say so my self.


Scene 3


Geek is in lab surrounded by wires.
Pulls a section of wire in the air and tosses it behind him.
Tugs at another section and secures it in place.
Places top on the box (sound modulator).







Monday 17 March 2008

GANGSTER AND GEEK, GEEK PROFILE

CHARACTER ANALYSIS

PROJECT

Gangster and the Geek
NAME
geek
SEX
male
AGE
23
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
Plump, short 5 ft3ish , glasses, quite moleish?
APPEARANCE/HYGIENE
Scruffy, badly dressed in clothes that don’t match. ( but quite funky but he just wears them badly.
IQ
Very bright, verging on genius
DIET
macrobiotic
CULTURAL BACKGROUND
Nerd culture, star trek conventions etc.
HISTORY
A total recluse because his parents fought like cat and dog. So he withdrew into him self and lived in his own world. didn’t have any real friends, was a bit of a victim and easy target because of his feeble appearance and geekness. Tired of being beat up, and not wanting to be abused like his dad ( mums a maniac) he began going to a boxing club in an attempt to learn how to defend his self. He meets gangster and they become unlikely friends. They keep each other out of trouble in different ways.
INCOME
Writes software and posts it online for free, makes a little off of the advertising that pays him to post on his websites
OCCUPATION
Various geeky things like writing software. And always will be a student of some level
EDUCATION
Very little, he is self taught as he was always brighter than his lecturers
SEXUAL PREFERERENCE
Confused, secretly bi-curious but only because he has never experienced any type of sexual contact. He is yet to discover that he is straight. To his disappointment as he thinks gays are very cool and trendy.
FAMILY
Mum dad, and a mean grandfather.
OTHER

Thursday 13 March 2008

RULES, RED BALLOON

POSSIBLE RULES FOR BOTTLE DUDE.

ALWAYS SWAYS ABOUT.
NEVER WALKS IN STARIGHT LINE.
SLURS WHEN HE SPEAKS.
OVERLY HYPER.
STEREO TYPICAL DRUNKS PERSONALITY.

MORE CHARACTER DRAWINGS



THE DJ IS LOOSLY BASED ON A FRIEND OF MINE. THE BEE CAME ABOUT AFTER DOING A LOGO FOR A FRIEND, MAY EVOLVE INTO AN ANIMATED GIF, OR SHORT FOR ADVERTISING PURPOSES.

MADE THIS ON PHOTOBUCKET


GANGSTER AND GEEK

Gangster and the Geek.

Following a conversation with a friend of mine I decided to begin to plan making an animation called The Gangster and the Geek.
He was teasing me calling me a total geek, and I was like what ever you’re a cardboard gangster.
We were laughing at the idea of a gangster and a geek, two total opposites. The contrast of the two would make for a great story, or set of story’s. I suppose this idea is where the story for Big Things came from. Big things spiralled into something else, it wasn’t true to my original vision of what I wanted to do, mainly because I was lacking in knowledge to make it, to a extent I still am, all be it I am collecting pieces of information for when I do eventually get round to making it the way that I want to.

CHARACTER ANALYSIS

PROJECT

GANGSTER AND THE GEEK
NAME
GANGSTER/GANGSTAR
SEX
MALE
AGE
24
PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION
TALL APROX 6FT. BROWN HAIR, *AFRO OR SHAVED?*.
BROAD SHOLDERS. AVERAGE TO SKINNY LEGS. LOTS OF UPPER BODY STRENGTH AS HE TRAINED AS A BOXER WHEN HE WAS A LITTLE YOUNGER.
REASONABLY ATTRACTIVE, CARAMEL COLOURED SKIN. LONG EYE LASHES, GREEN ALMOND SHAPED EYES.WIDE MOUTH, ALWAYS AT A SLIGHT ANGLE.
BIG HANDS. LOTS OF VARIOUS TATTOS.
APPEARANCE/HYGIENE
VERY WELL DRESSED IN STREET FASHION, BAGGY, SPORTS CLOTHES, JEANS,HOODYS, T-SHIRTS.
IQ
AVERAGE/A LITTLE BELOW AVERAGE. ALTHOUGH VERY STREET WISE
DIET
LOTS OF STEAK AND CHICKEN.
CULTURAL BACKGROUND
HIP HOP STREET CULTURE DEFINES HOW HE CONDUCTS HIS LIFE
HISTORY
MOVED ABOUT A LOT AS HE WAS GROWING UP AS HIS FATHER HAS TO TAKE JOBS ALL OVER. HIS FATHER BROUGHT HIM UP, MUM LEFT WHEN HE WAS 2. WENT TO VARIOUS SCHOOLS, WHICH HE HARDLY TURNED UP TO.
DAD WAS SENT TO PRISION FOR ARMED ROBERY AND HE WENT TO LIFE WITH HIS GRANDMOTHER WHEN HE WAS ABOUT 12.SHE WAS STRICT BUT FAIR VERY RELIGIOUS WOMAN MAD HIM GO TO CHURCH.
SHE KEPT IN IN SCHOOL FOR HIS REMAINING YEARS AND SENT HIM TO BOXING TO FOCUS HIS ANGER.
HE MET HIS BEST FRIEND WHILE AT BOXING HIS FRIEND IS A SKINNY GANGLY WIMP WHO JOINED BOXING TO LEARN TO PROTECT HIM SELF AND IT TURNED OUT HE HAD A NATURAL GIFT FOR GETTING OUT THE WAY OF A PUNCH.
THEY BOTH WENT TO THE SAME HIGH SCHOOL WHERE THEY LEARNED ABOUT GIRLS AND WEED.

INCOME
VARRIED DEPENDS HOW MUCH DRUGS HE SELLS.
WAGE IN GARAGE APROX £300 PER WEEK.
OCCUPATION
DRUG DEALER, SCAM ARTIST. WORKS IN A GARAGE TO COVER HIS OTHER WAYS OF MAKING MONEY.
EDUCATION
A LITTLE WHEN HE TURNED UP TO SCHOOL. EDUCATED ON THE STREETS
SEXUAL PREFERERENCE
WOMEN WOMEN AND MORE WOMEN. HIGH SEX DRIVE, BUT FAILS TO CONNECT ON ANY KIND OF EMOTIONAL LEVEL. CURRENTLY HE HAS 3 GIRLFRIENDS WHO HE RARELY SEES OTHER THAN WHEN HE WANTS FED OR TO HAVE SEX.
FAMILY
DAD IN PRISION, AND HIS GRAN WHO HE WOULD DO ANYTHING FOR.
OTHER

TECHNIQUES

THE KEY FRAME.

Key frames are used at either side of a action, at the start and end. For example if a little boy was to swing a bat a key frame would be the first frame of the boy beginning to swing the bat, one as the bat connects with the ball, as this begins the action of the ball changing course, and one of the bat coming to a stop. Key frames are normally of a higher quality than in other frames.

THE OTHER FRAMES - THE INBETWEEN

An inbetween is a frame that comes between the key frame. Although more time is spent on the key frame, the inbetween plays a bigger role in holding the animation together. Without the inbetween frames the timing for the whole animation would be wrong and the whole look of the piece would be weak. Inbetween frames are drawn at varied spacing this is how the animations timing either increases or decreases

SQUASH AND STRETCH

The principals of squash and stretch can be applied to everything in animation from walk cycles, to bouncing balls. Squash and stretch indicated the weight of object is its heavy its going to compress more as it hit’s the ground than something that’s light with little weight to it. Squash and stretch also hints to the viewer what material the objects made from.
often in animation squash and stretch of over exaggerated for impact, comedy or to make the animation look real, in Disney’s case hyper realistic

DIGITAL VS PEN MY THOUGHTS

Personally I have struggled to convert to drawing things digitally, I’m so used to working on paper.
I find that it takes me two or three times longer to produce work digitally than it would for me to draw. There is obvious differences in the how work looks and I’m not sure I have a preference, each method of working has its own charm. However Rhubarb and Custard for example should have been left alone, recently a new computer version has been on television. The animators have tried to recreate the colour variations that were caused by felt tip pen and not being able to maintain exact colour, unfortunately it looks like they haven’t achieved the same charm that the hand drawn version had. I think this example illustrates that pen and ink still have a place in animation.

train people

Train people.

I have a really bad habit of finding myself starring at people on trains, busses, cafes or where ever I am really. So I have started to keep a wee note book about my impressions of people so I can develop characters using the information.

Random lady- look roughly 28ish. Smartly dressed, looks professional maybe an office worker . She’s writing in a spiral notepad, strikes me as a workaholic cramming in extra work when and where ever she can. Is she trying to get a promotion, or is she simply trying to impress all her colleagues by doing the brunt of the work for them. She’s more than likely single maybe has a cat or some other wee pet to keep her company. The lady has over protective parents who are constantly interfering in her life, trying to set her up with hopeless men.

Guitar boy - a boy with a guitar on his way to jam at his friends house. He’s the guitarist for a band that’s made up of four of his friends. They play in the arty cafĂ© bars around the city centre. They only really get gigs because they are part of the right crowd, the music they play is alright but its nothing special. He is a only child, parents are divorced, both are financially well off so he’s been spoiled always had everything he wants, handed to him on a plate, because they each feel guilty and are over compensating. He has a girlfriend who has been with him since secondary school, she’s sleeping with his best friend because she is bored with her relationship, but she doesn’t want to break it off because she has it in her head that his band will become big, and she likes the idea of dating a star.

Dude with I-Pod - Quiet, nice, hardworking, family man. He’s on his way home from work, hes desperate to get home to his wife and new baby son. The I-Pod he’s listening to was a present from his wife, it was a total surprise as they are so broke having to care for a new baby.
On the surface he’s a well rounded really nice guy, but he has a secret! He’s really a cross dresser and when his wife is out he opens a bottle of wine and heads for her wardrobe.

flip boom wee review

Wee review of Flip Boom

A few days ago I downloaded the trial version of Flip Boom, its almost like a over simplified version Toon Boom. Its very user friendly, its has large bright buttons for its various functions, which make it easy to navigate around the program. Some of its features are onion skin, draw behind, erase, paint, brush. There is a strip along the bottom for frames, it has a preview of the image on each frame, this adds to the clarity of the program.
The program is all about being user friendly, it’s a great piece of software for kids or just to mess around and have fun with. Obviously it lacks the full range of features that its big brother Toon Boom has like lip-sync, and being able to add sound.

nico character drawing, big things


some random character sketches









story of scotland. some story boards








red balloon





Tuesday 11 March 2008

scrips for small part- story of scotland

Script.
Draft 1

Scene 1

Hot summer day at the foot of Bennichie mountain, in Inverurie.
The countryside is no longer the landscape you would expect due to the irreparable damage to the ozone layer.
The grass and greenery of the tree has become harsh and red in colour, evolutions way of protecting the environment.
Felix is on a dig along with several colleagues they are researching the area and its history.

Felix: is on her knees brushing dust off a large stone, slowly uncovering its carvings.

Unnamed man 1: shouts. Lets pack up before the weather turns.

Felix : Nods her head and signals help her remove the stone from its resting place.

The stone is winched on to the back of a truck, every one jumps into cars and drives off as the weather turns to a storm.


Scene 2

Passengers in rear of car : chatting excitedly about the days dig and all the artefacts they have gathered.

Felix: sat in the front of car on passenger side keeping an eye on a satellite navigator.
In a low even tone of voice so the other passengers don’t over hear:
they are not far behind us we had better hurry, if we get stuck in this storm they will find us.

Unnamed man 2: cast his gaze to Felix for a moment then accelerates rapidly.

Scene 3

The vehicles turn into a private road as they do big gates close behind them, they drive up to a old manor and a garage door opens from the ground closing behind them.
They all exit their vehicles, unload their equipment, and the days finds along with the stone.

Felix: turns to unnamed man 2, taps the stone saying there is definitely something different about this one, look at that its like nothing I’ve ever seen on one of these (she runs her hand along the carvings)

Unnamed man 2: winks at Felix smiles, saying this could be a money maker.

Felix: winks back and with a sarcastic smile replies, just as well I found it then. Isn’t it! Not everyone’s agenda is cash !

Scene 4

Felix walks along a antique filled corridor into a room closing the door tight behind her.
She throws her jacket off sits on her bed unlaces her boots, curls up on the bed and falls asleep.
She begins to dream, it’s the same dream she has all the time.

….. she wakes up in a unfamiliar room in
Felix walks to end of corridor, peers around door to a girl crying.

The girl looks identical to her she is sitting at a dressing table sobbing with her hear in her hands, on the dressing table is a hand held comb and mirror.
She picks up the mirror looks in it and wipes away her tears.

Felix wakes up to an alarm going off. She quickly gets changed and rushes down stairs to find out what’s going on.

trial scrip for part later in film
Script for small section of story.

The inn

Alasdair is in a small dark dirty inn, just off the coast.

Alasdair: whiskey please.

Barmaid: Acknowledges him, turns her back to pour his drink.

Fisherman 1: notices the stranger

Alasdair: I was told I could get some help here, some information.

Barmaid: turns her head

Alasdair: About a island, just…..

Fisherman 1: listens to what’s being said

Barmaid: she cuts him off mid sentence, And gestures to him to move to the corner which is cast in shadow.
She finishes pouring his drink and brings it over to him.

Alasdair/Barmaid: They whisper in the corner for a moment, he hands her a few coins.

Stow away

Two fishermen are on their a boat preparing to set sail. Both have their back to Alasdair. He sticks to the shadows and quietly climbs aboard. He pulls a pile of fishing nets over himself to hide.

One of the men had seen him in the inn and had been keeping an eye on him, knowing that he had stowed away on the boat.





Flash back.

King: throws a bag of gold at the fisherman.
In a raised aggressive voice: oh and be warned, if any one should find out!
Takes in a deep breath, then calmly says: be on the look out for a man, if he should try to get to her allow him passage. But be sure you leave them there with no way off, and send word to me.

Fisherman1: holding his hat, looking at his feet.
Yes my king.

King: if you help to aid his capture I will see you are rewarded. Waves his hand for the fisherman to leave, that is all.

Fisherman 1: leans down to pick up his gold, walks out the room backwards still with his head down.

At the shore

The boat pulls up to the shore.

Fisherman 1: leaves the boat with supplies and place them in a large wooden storage box a little way from the shore.

Alasdair: sneaks off the boat into the water. Emerges from the water behind a group of rocks.
He follows the fisherman up to the supply box, just beyond it he can see a small cottage.
He sees her standing at the window. And runs to the house giving his position away.
He shouts jess………….. Jessica. I can believe I found you again.

Jessica: standing at the window watching the supplies being dropped off. She sees someone running and turns her gaze to him. She recognises him she has a look of terror on her face, as she realises that he has been seen by the fisherman.
She runs out the cottage shouts, you shouldn’t have come. She has a tear in her eye
They embrace each other.

Fisherman1: looks on. Then turns his back and begins to head back to the boat.

Jessica: wait.. please.. please wait !!

The couple run after him, down to the shore.

Alasdair: I’m sorry I stowed away, but please, I will pay you to take us back.

Jessica: lowers her head. you don’t understand he’s an employee of the so called king !

Fisherman 2: what’s going on.

Fisherman 1: I pay you to work, mind your own business. As makes his way on board the boat.

Jessica: please sir, he will kill us. We have to get off this island.

Fisherman 1: has his back to them trying to ignore them, the boat begins to move off.

Jessica: on her knees pleading and sobbing. Please. Don’t leave us here.

Alasdair: you will regret this, don’t you realise what your doing.
Pauses and looks down to jess
Don’t worry.
He kneels down next to her, lifts her head. He wipes her tears then kisses her.
I’ve come this far to find you, we will find away out of this.

Jessica: lifts her head with a look of defiance in her eyes.
I no what I have to do.




The summoning

Jessica: standing in the shallow water. Lifts her hands to the sky.
She chants in Gaelic.

Search they sky. Search the sea.
The journey home, I have to find.
In the sky I command u to work for me.
Show me light, strike hard till the seamen go blind.
(Lightning begins to strike at the ocean)

In the depth of the dark, cold water.
By speed and haste take me across the waves
I command you to carry Lucifer’s daughter.
The monsters deep wake from your graves.
(The sea begins to churn and massive waves form. She falls to her knees)

massive creature emerges from the water, its making a angry screeching noise.
Its tail crashes on the rocky shore allowing the pair to board him.

Alasdair: shocked looks to the creature then to Jessica.
Takes Jessica (who is worn out kneeling on the sand) by the hand.

Jessica: exhausted she collapses into Alasdair’s arms.

Alasdair: catches her and lifts her.
I’ve got you my love.
He carry’s her on to the animal.

Race back to shore

The creature sets off at lightning speed, to catch up and beat the boat back to the shore.

Either illustrated by a animated map.
Or
A front view from above of the boat and sea creature.



Still to script
They made it back to the mainland in a lightning pace arriving before the seaman could send word to the king of their union together on the island.

Within the week they had married, and set about building an army. Over the next year they grew in strength, and numbers.
By the time the year was over they had a child together, realising it would be in danger it was sent to seek safety in a convent in France , they planned to send for the child as soon as possible.

During the same year Ruairdh having been tipped off by the sea man, he prepared for his sisters threat to become apparent.
He doubled his army in size, and summoned dark warriors from the underworld.

The battle commenced on Christmas day 1338 on the mountain range on Bennichie, where Jess and Alasdair had set up camp.
The slaughter was imminent, they were outnumbered the battle was drawn out only because on the protection offered from the mountain.
On the 2nd day they had been captured and held at the top of the mountain by Ruairdh’s top guards.
Ruairdh unsheathed his sword turned and in a single movement sliced off Alasdair’s head. She looked down to her feet as her loves head rolled towards her.
Ruairdh turned to her, “commit your self to me, and marry me! Or u will serve as a warning to all who plan to cross me”
She spat in his face, held her head high, told him “does what u will, u can’t hurt me anymore”
Ruairdh lifted his sword and plunged it into the earth, as he began to chant lightning connected with the sword, and the sky darkened.
He pulled it from the ground and pointed it at her the lightning that had been harnessed into the weapon now surged wildly from it in the direction on her, and she was gone.

story of scotland

Set in the spring of 1308. A young woman becomes embroiled in a blood feud that risks the peace and independence of Scotland.
Robert Bruce and his supporters in their quest for an independent Scotland assassinate English ally the Red Cromyn.

The woman seeks revenge for the murder of father the Red Cromyn, John III Cromyn, lord of Badenoch.
She had been born out of wedlock and was kept a secret. Her father was huge part in her life and made sure she never wanted for nothing.

Her mother had passed away several years ago, leaving her with a vast knowledge of the black arts of which practiced and had been previously passed on through her mother’s bloodline. In seeking revenge it was this knowledge she drew upon.

Her faith always lay in Lucifer, and Bruce’s in God, this war was not to be theirs but only played out through by puppet masters not of this world.

Light shone through the dark just enough for the pair to fall for each other, in this pure emotion the darkness is forced back.

A secret wedding is planned, but the love wasn’t to last as punishment the woman is locked in a stone to live forever watching over Scotland…
Known locally as the Maidenstone she still stands at the foot of Bennichie. Watching, waiting, hoping for someone to decipher the stones carvings.
Characters.

Felix- is a distant relative of Abigail. Its her that pieces together the story and eventually teams up with the man foretold on the stone. born in America as her distant relatives has fled Scotland during the wars which began in 1308.
She’s very independent, sarcastic, witty, she’s bright and passionate about her work.
Her family being Scottish in origin she’s interested in its history. As a historian she pulls enough strings to be granted permission and funding to do some research in the Scottish highlands.

Felix’s team.
Mitchell- works with Felix and has a secret a crush on her. He’s a total science geek, loves what he does, overly intelligent. Charlie’s twin brother.

Charlie- is Mitchell’s twin sister and only really on the trip as a way of travelling. Typical blonde airhead to begin but eventually comes into her own through the story showing she has depth to her.

Zander- not as bright as the others but he was brought along because he’s the protective force in the team. He’s all about money and glory.



Robert Bruce – current king, but in truth is the devil.
Self-righteous, suave, intelligent, apt in the game of war. People love him as he is manipulative, but charismatic to the masses, makes promises that want to be heard by the people. True agenda is to cause pain on Gods children, and use Scotland as his base on earth, as the population are tired and easily manipulated into his way of thinking.

Jessica (Jess) Bruce – meaning of her name in Hebrew is seen by God, this could have a dual meaning as the devil possibly wanted her to be seen by God as a way of getting one over on him, and also it could mean seen by God as he intervened making the child one of good and not evil.
Quiet, secretive, intelligent, sits back and takes in everything going on around her, has the true interest of the Scottish people at heart. Pale complexion with red flowing hair.

Ruairdh Bruce – pronounced ro-arree, Gaelic name for Roderick meaning famous ruler. Name indicated his father’s plans for him. Ruthless, greedy, and war hungry, dictator. His father’s puppet to be used after his father’s body dies a stand in until his father is re born.
His one flaw is the jealously he has for his sister and Alasdair; he is lonely and feels his sister should be at his side and he would do anything to have this.

Abigail - Hebrew name for handmaiden. Brought up Jessica in the grounds of the Bruce estate. She had to give her children to her mother to look after as lack of money meant she had to work. She had lost her husband during the wars. She missed her children desperately and looking after jess took the edge off it slightly. She was also paid a little more which meant that she could send more money home for her family. She and loved jess dearly, it was her love that had the major influence on turning Jess to god. Not particularly bright, worked hard and stayed out the way. Affectionate, loving, friendly, and honest. Went to church and believed in god.

Red Comyn, John III Comyn lord of Badenoch – should have been king through his blood line, he truly has Scotland’s best interests at heart, he knows there is something amiss with Bruce and sees him for what he really is.
Soft, caring, loyal to his family and his people. Would go to any lengths to protect, and in the end he paid with his life.

Alasdair Comyn - Gaelic spelling of Alexander, defender of men.
The son of Comyn and the next in the true blood line to be king of Scotland. His father had passed on his passion, although he needed the aid of Jess to realize his path. Before jess he was filled with hatred and anger because his father had been murdered. These emotions playing into the hands of
the devil.


The symbols.

Front panels on the stone

Tells the story of how Jess and Alasdair were over powered.
The mirror represents the female within the stone, and is any one were to find the mirror it would act as a guide to the circumstance that lead her to life force being cast into the stone, which stands as a warning not to cross the king.
The beast, sea animal, is the sea monster that aided their escape from the island. Depicting part of the story.
The chariot and z-rod depicts the battle which lead to the capture and murder of Jessica and Alasdair. The rod is the sword which lead to their demise.
The beasts in the top panel of the stone indicates the power behind the king, the devil and his dark army.

Back panels on the stone

Prophesy of how darkness can be overturned. The future events of the story.
(this part of story still to be written)
The man at the top with his arms outstretched wielding a sword, standing between two sea monsters. This represents the man which can turn the fair of the world around, and deliver us from evil. The sea monsters represent that he is strongest when at sea and has power there.
The large cross indicates Gods chosen ones can undo the wrongs that have been done, originally had a family name carved onto it but was ordered to be chiselled off by the king.
The circular design with four smaller discs within shows how everyone’s fait is tied together and will inevitably they will reunite time and time again until the balance of good and bad is restored.







synopsis

1308’s events are viewed by Felix in the future, after she finds the stone on a research visit to Scotland by her and her team. Following the find, her dreams (a recurring dream of a woman sobbing, turns out to be Abigail) become much more vivid and she starts to see things in the mirror that’s been passed down through her family from mother to daughter. She thinks she’s going crazy and begin researching her family’s past after she realises that the carving on the back of her mirror is identical to one of the engravings on the stone. Her task is made difficult by the authorities and pressure from a vicious king keen to make her his trophy
.

Story begins in 1308 during the Battle of Inverurie (mouth of Ury, or loosely interpreted as Mouth of Fury). The Battle was part of the Scottish wars of independence.
Inverurie is a small farming town outside Aberdeen the story is played out in the magnificent countryside, and around the Benniechie mountain range.

Bruce promised freedom to the Scots, and he could give it, at least from the English. Now as king he ruled over the Scottish people using them as he saw fit, his plans were greater this was his first step.
He would reap revenge for being cast out of heaven, he would cause as much chaos and pain as possible while he reigned over them.
He had on small problem the body he was in would only live so long, he had to find someone to rule in his place until he could come back and finish what he started.

A child was born, Jessica, to a witch his most loyal supporter and one of few who knew the truth. He was furious they were sure it would be male. The child was cast aside and brought up by an employee of Bruce, a maid, Abigail, who loved her as her own.
Another child was born this time a boy, to follow his father’s footsteps, the child never wanted for anything and never was apart from Bruce.
The child learned from his father from the moment it was born, and from his mother he learned about dark magic.

Red Comyn was adamant that Robert was no good for the people. What he saw was the people starving, working for nothing, basically slaves to the King. The people hadn’t realised the truth as they were just content to not be at war any longer with the English, and because things were marginally better they assumed Bruce had their interests at heart.
Comyn’s aspirations for Scotland had been grander than this; his ideal was for people to eventually rule them selves not to have an alternative dictatorship.
He needed an informant from within Robert Bruce’s estate.

Abigail had worked for John Comyn’s uncle before he had died. Comyn knew she was a good honest woman and that he could trust her, especially with the added incentive of moving her family closer and taking care of them.
Abigail was only too happy to oblige, she had grown increasingly worried about the goings on in the Bruce house hold. The fact that her family would be looked after was just a bonus.

Through information being filtered back from Abigail Comyn began piecing together a small part of Bruce’s plans for Scotland.
Only he got it wrong he thought the witch was manipulating Robert.
He put a plan in action to kill her only it back fired resulting in Bruce finding out.
There was a battle Comyn mustered all his old allies, as there was a few left in hiding that believed that Robert Bruce had his own agenda other than Scotland’s best interests.
Some 3000 went to war against Bruce, they marginally lost. Bruce was enraged and murdered the Red Comyn.

Abigail felt deeply guilty for what had happened she was fearful for the safety of his child. She hid the boy with her family knowing that Bruce wouldn’t look there for him, as Bruce thought her partly to stupid to think of it, and to scare to cross him anyway.
The boy grew up unaware of who his father was, thinking himself Abigail’s son. It wasn’t until his 18th birthday that she unveiled his identity to him.
He wasn’t shocked that he wasn’t her son as he had always been aware he didn’t fit, but he was shocked at his true identity.
Rage began to take over him he couldn’t deal with how he felt and disappeared.

During the time he left he began to realise what he should do, but he had no idea how to go about it.
He remembered Jessica, he dreamed of seeing her again raising a family with her it was his feelings for her that eventually brought him home.

During his travels the king Robert Bruce had died through natural causes leaving the kingdom to his son.
Also while he was away his surrogate mother Abigail had been found out she was brutally, publicly tortured by Ruairdh. He had personally carved her up after extracting the truth from her distributing her body parts to all thoughts who thought to cross him.

Jessica was banished her as a precaution, she to was the child of the devil and a witch this scared him a little as she was the only one who could do him harm. She now lived on a small island just off the coast of the most northern point of Scotland. She lived in a small cottage but she was relived to be out of her brother’s grasp.

Over time with evil securely in power things had gone from bad to worse, the people Scotland were suffering terribly. Ruairdh’s perception of fun was brutality, and the torture of people. His version of a relationship with women was to rape and murder them afterwards.
The boy had grown into pure evil. Ruairdh was out to make an impression, trying to live up to his fathers hopes for him.
He was striving to live eternally in his father’s kingdom on his right-hand side.

Alasdair looked and looked till he eventually found her. He stowed away on the small boat that went to the island to drop of bare essentials to her. On seeing her be broke down in tears she held him and the made love,
During which he asked to marry her.
The time they had together till the next boat came was bliss, but they realised they had to go to the mainland and attempt to put right all the wrongs.

They pleaded with the seaman but he was harsh and wouldn’t let them board.
Jess knew she had some kind of power but she had never used it for anything, she had always thought it wrong, but knowing she was about to set on a quest for the good of the people she had no choice.
She summoned a giant sea monster, which had been asleep for 1000 years.
He was angered to have been woken, but had no choice but to serve her.
They made it back to the mainland in a lightning pace arriving before the seaman could send word to the king of their union together on the island.

Within the week they had married, and set about building an army. Over the next year they grew in strength, and numbers.
By the time the year was over they had a child together, realising it would be in danger it was sent to seek safety in a convent in France , they planned to send for the child as soon as possible.

During the same year Ruairdh having been tipped off by the sea man, he prepared for his sisters threat to become apparent.
He doubled his army in size, and summoned dark warriors from the underworld.

The battle commenced on Christmas day 1338 on the mountain range on Bennichie, where Jess and Alasdair had set up camp.
The slaughter was imminent, they were outnumbered the battle was drawn out only because on the protection offered from the mountain.
On the 2nd day they had been captured and held at the top of the mountain by Ruairdh’s top guards.
Ruairdh unsheathed his sword turned and in a single movement sliced off Alasdair’s head. She looked down to her feet as her loves head rolled towards her.
Ruairdh turned to her, “commit your self to me, and marry me! Or u will serve as a warning to all who plan to cross me”
She spat in his face, held her head high, told him “does what u will, u can’t hurt me anymore”
Ruairdh lifted his sword and plunged it into the earth, as he began to chant lightning connected with the sword, and the sky darkened.
He pulled it from the ground and pointed it at her the lightning that had been harnessed into the weapon now surged wildly from it in the direction on her, and she was gone.

The same day a standing stone covered with symbols appeared at the foot of the mountain. The stone was there to warn the town folk of the dramatic occurrence that had taken place.
the images on the front depict the story of Jessica and Alister, and their struggle against an evil tyrant. The carvings on the back are clues for future generations, how to bring back the balance of good and evil.

Story unfinished, final part is concluded in the future.

Through out the story it jumps backward and forward, the future acts as a narrative to the past through dreams and the mirror.

big things animation

evolving art


made this wee animation today. i really liked working this way, the animation evolved as we progressed. I was kinda free because of the medium that we worked in. I would very much like to work in this way again, mabe having a background or something appear before going on to animate the foreground using computer animation.


ideas ideas!!!

Last year my dad passed away, since then the idea of what happens to us has been a recurring topic for me. One story I have written called Only Angela was reasonably good, but mind blowingly depressing, and I don’t really want to portray peoples passing in such a way. I really like how some cultures celebrate death, like the Mexican day of the dead.
There is so many ways to view what happens to us from reincarnation to becoming a ghost. Both have fantastic potential for great story material.
My daughter recently asked me if we are born again when we die, and I told her that some people believe we are, and I teased her saying for all you know grandpa might be your rabbit.
I see lots of mileage in story’s evolving from this theme, humorous, sad possibly even with a surrealist slant.

idea for a short animation

I would like to make a short animation that tells an almost biographical account of a out casts life. To do this I would like to have the story begin in a dusty old house. In the house there is a picture on a table covered in webs, with a sepia picture of a happy family scene that had been taken on a day out or a family celebration. The scene would then zoom in and become the event that’s in the photograph. The characters contort and morph either into ugly versions of them selves or into monsters for brief moments. The reason for this is to show the ugliness in their hears. The camera flies past them to a character that’s in the background, possibly sitting in a shop doorway, or under a bridge. The character (still to be worked out) is talking to his pet, discussing why he/she has been abandoned.
The idea is to suggest that the young character has been rejected by society as he is different, better maybe. Society in the small animation would be nasty, tainted, mean and cold, possibly how it may become in real world society.
I am thinking that the character will show strong traits of goodness and kindness, but I would like to avoid stereotypes.

Another scenario for this scene is to highlight homelessness. The house with the photograph could illustrate how we all take having a home for granted. The photograph could be how life for the homeless person used to be before what ever events lead to his/her demise. It might be nice to show the image as a cardboard cut out, and when the camera passes by one falls over.
If this scenario is worked I think it would be great to have the pet replaced with a pigeon, being fed what ever food the homeless person has.

Thursday 6 March 2008

Big things

I wrote this story last year. The characters were closely based on people I know from going to night clubs. I feel there is alot of potential in this, and i would like to rework it or possible write a series of short stories based on Nico and his adventures.

The height of the summer is setting in warm long days, hot sticky nights, and the fun atmosphere that is brought with the summer sunshine. Nico is lying in bed making best use of the free minutes he has. He’s trying to call the phone numbers he aquired last weekend. "What" he can’t believe it, all wrong numbers. He just doesn’t understand, thought they were really into him. He decides they are just a distraction anyway, after all its just women, music always first. If he’s ever going to make it big they will just get in the way, hold him back. It’s Saturday night anyway, always going to be some fresh, fine ladies in the club tonight. Time to get up his mums shouting “Get your lazy ass outta bed boy; you know your going shopping with me today!”

Nico drags his self out of bed and into the shower. His mum is still shouting in the back ground “hurry up boy, and don’t think u going to that sinful place again tonight you can just stay home with me”. He just ignores her he knows better than to aggravate his mum. The rest of the day drags in, the only thing that gets him through the shopping trip is his day dreaming. In his mind he’s in a mansion somewhere in America with half naked women all over him, and his big entourage.

It’s just as well his mum goes to bed early or he would never get out the front door. After a splash of aftershave and a quick brush or his teeth he’s off tip toeing out the door and into the warm night. Swaggering down the street gives his boys a quick call to see if they are heading out, they might appear depends how wasted they get, no matter though he will catch up with them after the club. He’s adamant he’s gone pull tonight, take some gorgeous blonde to his friends and show them all.
He checks his wallet to make sure he took the free pass to get in the club; he’s got just enough money to get drunk and a little protection tucked away just in case he gets lucky.

Outside there is a massive burley looking guy on the door, he’s new must have just started. Nico nods to the steward and goes inside. He’s feeling pretty hyped up as he enters the nightclub. After a quick look around he heads over to the bar to order a drink and scope out the crowd. In the far corner of the dance floor there’s a group of stunning women, one in particular tall, blonde, curvy, and just right. Gulping down his drink he orders another and another for courage. Half an hour or so later he gets his groove on the dance floor, edging his way over to the leggy blonde. Doing his best to look cool trying to catch her eye, only to look a little desperate, he edged a little closer still. He’s dancing in front of her thinking to him self how sexy he looks, how she can resist. Fact is she can’t even see him she’s got her eye on a tall handsome man over at the other side of the dance floor. The tall man has his eye on every thing and up every skirt and down every cleavage. The air in the place is hot wet and heavy, its only adding to the atmosphere, every one looks drenched in sweat.

Young Nico is still dancing his heart out. In his mind he is onto a sure thing, after all how can anyone resist he is destined to be the next big thing. So sure that she is into him Nico is grinding with her. He’s wrapped his self around her leg, it’s only then she notices him. Initially she thought some animal had taken to her leg just as a dog in heat might. She needs a crow bar to pry this thing off. She pushing Nico off, only Nico’s one track mind thinks she’s playing hard to get.

The tall guy has been watching from the other side of the room, this is his way in, his golden ticket to some heavenly pleasure. He talks to the girl asks if she needs help. Nico is enraged, utterly furious, he bites the tall guy in the leg. Tall guy is hopping about grabs a pint glass traps Nico inside. Nico can’t believe what just happened; he didn’t even see it coming. He’s trying to get out, banging on the glass shouting “let me out, I’m going to get you for this”. A sweet looking girl has been watching all of this, been watching Nico since he came into the club, even last week she was watching but was to shy to do anything else. Lilly the sweet girl is over right away to help both of them pushing and pulling from each side of the glass, he’s free, confused and wow who is this! Nico takes her in his arms straight away, kisses her.
The Tall guy whispers into blonde’s ear she just cant believe what he said, “of all the nerve”, she slaps him hard! The blonde leaves the club upset, the bouncer smiles as she is leaving. “Hello!!” they walk off together.
Nico and Lilly leave hand in hand; he really wants to show her off to his friends and perhaps even his mother.
All his friends loved her and he thinks maybe he does as well. They plan to meet the next day and every day after that.



RED BALLOON-NEW VERSION.Proposed shot list

1. stealing the bottle from the homelss person, whos asleep on the park bench.
2. drinking the contents of the bottle, throwing it away.
3. bottle then re-appears, full, aparantly taking on a life of its own.
4. follows the young ned to the bus stop.
5. discovers that they cant get on the bus as the bottle isn't allowed
6. they decide to walk to school instead of getting the bus.
7. bottle isnt allowed in the classroom, so ned gives it to the janitor to look after.
8. ned is in class sitting at desk looking fed up.
9. bell rings she leaves to go and retreve the bottle.
10. goes to janitor office and lets himself in to get his bottle.
11. jumps up and down trying to get bottle from shelf.
12. pulls over chair to get it.
13. walks home bottle follows.
14. starts to rain, ned shelters his new friend with his umbrella.
15. arrive at neds house.
16. mum wont let the bottle in house, throws it out of the window.
17. ned is in bedroom, his friend the bottle hovers at the window trying to get attention.
18. after a while of getting the neds attention, the ned gives in and climbs out the window to get his friend.
19.the walk about for a while occasionally stopping so the ned can have a drink.
20. they are at the shopping precinct when a gang of neddy bullies turn up.
21. they look at each other and run.
22. the bottle and the ned hide for a while in a shop door way.
23. thinking its safe they leave the hiding place.
24. bottle and ned walk down lane, bullies appear again .
25. they are chased around for a while.
26. bullies throw stones at them (the bottle).
27. the bottle is broken.
28. ned falls to knees in dispair.
29. slowly the ned realises that the days events were different from how first perceved. this is shown through a series of memories flashing back.

flash back. 1. prior to finding the bottle ned girl is bumped by ned boy.
2. distraught she steals bottle of booze from old man on park bench.
3. drinks the bottle dry.
4. subconciously goes to a shop for another bottle, grabs it from shelf and runs out the shop.
5. her friend shouts for her and ned girl pretends not to hear.
6. bus driver refuses to let a drunk on bus.
7. at the school janitor confiscated the bottle.
8. mum goes ballistic that she has come home drunk, trows bottle out window. sends ned girl to bedroom.
9. anoyed and drunk, she jumps out window, finds bottle lying on grass.
10. sees "bullys" comming round corner, they aren't bullies they are her friends, and her old boyfriend looking for her.

30. she look up after realising the truth, she sees that the bullies are her friends.
31. one of them aproach her and help her up.

Thursday 14 February 2008

Red Balloon

Possible idea for a reworking of the film by Albert Lamorisse is to use the structure of the story altering it to highlight issues in alcoholism.

the main character in the original finds friendship in a red balloon in the proposed version the main character is changed to a sterotypical glasweigan ned.
like the original the ned finds friendship in a object, in this version a bottle of buckfast is chosen to replace the ballon mainly as it has become a symbol for the youth culture in Scotland.
in keeping with the structure of the real story the bottle seems to follow the ned, and as to make it take on a life of its own the bottle seems to never empty, it is full every time it re-appears.

Following the same/similar events in red balloon the ned and his bottle come across obsticles such as the janitor, the teacher, the headmaster, bullies, and grandmother.

The friendship comes to a dramatic end when the pair are confronted by bullies. Its at this point the ned realises whats really been going on, that its him that has been purchasing the never ending supply of alcohol and that in trueth his has serious alcohol issues that has been reaping havock on his life and his loved ones.